Sunday, 30 October 2011

A deserving life

I look into the mirro with a cold shiver,
wondering which version of myself I would see
Today am caring, affectionate and loving
that is what you always wanted to see in me

I step into a brand new world
Its colorful just the way I heard!
Everywhere I look the trees are made of gold
Its a place where people's lives are valued more

I wake up when the alarm rings
Just to find out it was all a dream
For a long time now, I have been feeling
A life like this is very deserving.

9 comments:

  1. superb and very touching one ! ! !

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  2. Very well written Pyari, I love it! :) Touching and saddening. Keep on writing.

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  3. grt wrk pyari....hats off....wonderful exposure about love and dreams

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  4. heart touching one..
    yu cn be a gr8 a poet..

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  5. Its the best i have read. keep on writing. Also try humor.

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  6. Hay Shakespeare losses with u great thoughts and i am expecting more from..............

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